Thanks Emily, I gave the idea, you edit the way you think will work best and either place it on top section, or I will see if I can figure it out, I think we both have the same administrator privileges.
I've been writing lots more speeches, trying to change some tactics etc. will share on here in another day or so, I want to have audio accompanying them.
Hi Mr NWG:
1. Yes, audio is great ==> PLUS if you can manage slide shows in powerpoint, or in a short flash presentation,
that helps punctuate the points with visual images.
2. for your opening page, there is too much text and too many areas combined in one.
If these were broken up into different tabs for plans, etc. that would help.
Each page could have a BOLD HEADLINE, explanation in regular text, an IMAGE to the side, and links to related materials.
there needs to be more WHITE SPACE so the focus is on the MAJOR POINTS for people to skim quickly, then read the details afterwards.
3. Since you are good at writing up the content/material
maybe we need to shop for a web designer to take your material
and organize it visually where the average audience can follow and find all the links, very user friendly.
the content is the HARD part, and you have that down.
The editing can always be done after.
And yes, using sound and also visual images
will help. Do you have a youtube channel?
stickam.com used to have broadcast and chat functions
if you want to check that out, or something similar.
digitalsamba.com has the online conferencing that is better than skype
I know you are focused on material content, and we're both getting ahead of the process
Keep working as you are, and these developments and refinements will follow....